I have decided that my photostory would be a trip to the grocery store. I think that I can capture all the aspect which we have learned in the semester in photos from a trip to the grocery store. I intentionally took some photos with wires and other things I want to remove using Photoshop later in them.
I like the story you are trying to tell here. I would suggest you find a more clear picture of the greens. The apples look so sharp and crisp, while the picture of the greens look blurry and rushed. I think adding more food color and maybe a picture of the groceries in side the bag (like a picture looking into the bag) would be strong additions.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Maggie. I think you definitely have some great shot here, but more sharp photos of different veggies or other grocery items would add more to the story. Also, I really like the photo with the red and green apples, but don't see the need for the second photo with a different kind of apples.
ReplyDeleteThis is perfect. It is simple, straightforward, and you have some excellent shots.
ReplyDeleteYou are using macro view, middle view, and far away. The only suggestion I would have is for you to revisit the faraway landscape shots. Having them straightforward, makes the whole scene feel rather flat if you are revisiting that area anytime soon, try to drive over to the far side of the parking lot and get an angled view.
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